Hey everyone,

I've been looking over the pages and I've noticed a few things everyone or most everyone need to address

1. Drawing. The quality of drawing and lack of reference is coming clear. Please reassess, you all have much stronger skills in class.
2. Balance of black and white in the panels.
3. Line weight and line work. Control your lines, only use lines if they mean something.

These are all issues we've spoken about inclass. This week we will look more closely and consider it a WIP critique.

Keep working, and make a good show for class this week.

Steve